Introduction: In many societies, there is ongoing debate about whether higher education should be provided free of charge to all, irrespective of socioeconomic status, or if students ought to bear the costs themselves. While I acknowledge that free university access could promote equality, I largely disagree with making it entirely cost-free, as this approach may lead to inefficiencies and undervaluation of education.
Body 1: One primary reason for my position is that charging fees encourages students to take their studies more seriously. If tuition is free, individuals might enrol without genuine commitment, leading to higher dropout rates and wasted resources. For instance, in countries like Germany, where university is largely subsidised, some observers note that a small fee structure could motivate better attendance and completion. As a result, paying students tend to value their degrees more, fostering a sense of responsibility.
What to notice:
- Intro paraphrases "free for everyone" as "free of charge to all, irrespective of socioeconomic status".
- Thesis is partial: "I largely disagree" + reason. Not a black-and-white opinion.
- Body 1 follows TEEL exactly: topic sentence (fees → seriousness), explanation, Germany example, link to thesis.